tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1169099224342043637.post7290439173007553201..comments2023-09-27T12:40:18.571+01:00Comments on Charlie Serafini's Art Blog: Minor Project - Updated Storyboard Ending & Bed Thumbnailscharlie-serafinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02628770415873817684noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1169099224342043637.post-68558271524245280872016-10-14T19:49:59.001+01:002016-10-14T19:49:59.001+01:00I like what's happening eyes-wise on No 9 - I ...I like what's happening eyes-wise on No 9 - I think that works. In terms of what's happening to the duvet/blankets (the spider's back) maybe you should segment it more obviously, as if it's been shoved up, but go the whole hog, so:<br /><br />http://waynesword.palomar.edu/images/millip1b.jpg<br />http://m-y-d-s.com/bug/pill_bug/a.jpg<br />http://www.warrenphotographic.co.uk/photography/bigs/10521-Pill-Woodlouse-white-background.jpg<br /><br />Also - yes, the ending reads very clearly now. Looking forward to an animatic!tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com