tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1169099224342043637.post7548669917187683294..comments2023-09-27T12:40:18.571+01:00Comments on Charlie Serafini's Art Blog: What If Metropolis - OGR part 2charlie-serafinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02628770415873817684noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1169099224342043637.post-70667782559753373062014-11-19T14:26:36.309+00:002014-11-19T14:26:36.309+00:00OGR 19/11/2014
Hey Charlie - the good news is I t...OGR 19/11/2014<br /><br />Hey Charlie - the good news is I think you're pretty much 'good to go' in terms of taking this into Maya. The only elements I don't think work so well is the sign on the left-hand side structure - it's occluding too much and you're losing the 'shapeliness' of your individual elements. I'm wondering too if the foreground component on the left could introduce a bit more variance - i.e. not so exactly mirroring the component on the right. Just tweaks.<br /><br />That said, in terms of your presentation of your production art and orthographs, I think you could up the professionalism; for example, your coloured production art of your components still look a bit like a thumbnail sheet, as opposed to something you could hand-over, and there's no information re. differing scales between the various elements. I'd like to see you move towards a more published portfolio of production art and orthographs in readiness for week 12 and submission.<br /><br />Otherwise - get started!tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com