I enjoyed watching your infographic Charlie, it features the right kind of content, has great graphics, and is very fun. You’ve also managed to create twenty-six ‘slides’ that all feel interesting to watch too. I particularly like the ‘ninja’ scene, very fun. There’s a lot of work here Charlie and considering you wrote a script and sourced a voice over artist too it shows a great deal of commitment and good use of the time - Yes, if you had extra time there was room for more animation but overall I enjoyed the paired down aesthetic, it added a nice dimension to the film too. Well done
This is amazing Charlie! Made me laugh :')
ReplyDeletelots to enjoy here Charlie - but someone has to say it I guess - you're missing an 'X' ... can you insert one asap?
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your infographic Charlie, it features the right kind of content, has great graphics, and is very fun. You’ve also managed to create twenty-six ‘slides’ that all feel interesting to watch too. I particularly like the ‘ninja’ scene, very fun. There’s a lot of work here Charlie and considering you wrote a script and sourced a voice over artist too it shows a great deal of commitment and good use of the time - Yes, if you had extra time there was room for more animation but overall I enjoyed the paired down aesthetic, it added a nice dimension to the film too. Well done
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately your infographic does have one single fundamental problem (layered in two parts). Firstly the script which is a slightly too ‘wordy’ and features slightly ‘awkward’ fractured dialogue (easy to write hard to say). Secondly the flat reading which adds to the awkwardness, giving your animation a ‘clunky’ feel. My guess is your voice artist was struggling to find a way to speak your written dialogue. Overall this impacts on the fluidity of the animation and interrupts the communication and flow. Even though it’s a cliché perhaps an ‘A is for’ followed by a simple statement would have produced a better read and more constant rhythm. However, with a quick reworking of your script and a new read your film could be easily fixed due to its good ‘DNA’.