Saturday, 15 November 2014

What If Metropolis - Composition Feedback Required

Seeing as composition is something that was weak in my last project I really want to correct that. These are the thumbnails that stand out most for me due to their composition, I feel as if these are the 6 most interesting compositions I have at the moment and I need some opinions. Mainly focusing on the composition side of things, what catches your eye the most? Or are there any different compositions that you think could work?

Any feedback is extremely welcomed.

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5 comments:

  1. tutorphil15 November 2014 at 20:19

    I like 108 very much - though I like very much the tower forms in 121 - so I'd like to see you combine these elements - so a more expansive version of 108 - so for example, taking 108 into Photoshop and just 'growing' the world a bit more from that thumbnail. For me - definitely 108 and 121.

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  2. Kayliegh Anderson15 November 2014 at 20:20

    I think all of these are great to take forward but I personally like 122 and 108. :)

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  3. Samantha15 November 2014 at 20:36

    I like 108 too, however I do agree with Phil - try expanding the frame a little bit and show more of the environment. I also like 122 but I think it's mainly the colours that catch my eyes

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  4. charlie-serafini15 November 2014 at 20:50

    Thanks for the feedback everyone, I'll start developing 108!

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  5. v vbc bc15 November 2014 at 23:44

    Great thumbnails, consider the rule of thirds a little more though!

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