Before I went on the trip to Barcelona I artworked all of my storyboard, in preparation for the animatic. I did a draft and noticed there were a few things that need correcting/changing, I also got some advice from my peers which I adjusted accordingly.
The first draft has no sound and I was mainly just focusing on getting the basic timing down.
The second draft has sound effects but still lacks some background music, this could be crucial for telling the story accurately so that will be the thing I focus on next.
I like your use of sound effects, even without music it works well. no music might work well at the beginning to show the reality in his life , and as he becomes more free you could have some uplifting music.
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