Thursday, 27 October 2016

Minor Project - Animatic #2

I've got the full narration now and changed up some of the pacing and shots, I adjusted the ocean scene to try to add more tension in it.

1 comment:

  1. I think this is working nicely, Charlie - I don't know if you can go back to your voice talent once last time... but I think his performance of the doctor's line makes it actually a bit difficult to understand what is being said. I wonder if a more ponderous, elderly and patrician sounding doctor might be more 'world of adults' while also ensuring we hear the thing about the pills much more plainly.