Sunday 16 November 2014

What If Metropolis - Composition Development Thumbnails 157 - 160

With the feedback I got from my last post I started to work on the framing of my world, I tried to expand it out to show more of the world as suggested and added elements from a few of my other thumbnails. 158 - 160 feel more like a city to me as they're quite busy, 160 is possibly my favourite because of its lighting.


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  1. I like 160 too, the atmosphere is nice! I was wondering though...could you try giving the foreground an angle? Some kind of a perspective, because right now it's painfully horizontal, almost like a theatre decoration.. That's just an idea though, maybe would be worth trying out? : )

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    1. Ella said the exact same thing, I will give it a try :)
      Thanks for the feedback

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