Below is the final version of the poem, an idea of what the scenes could look like and the boys design so far. The narration would preferably need to put on different voices for the different characters dialogues. It's quite a dark story so if that can be reflected in the narration that would also be ideal.
Good job, Charlie! Looking forward to getting this narrated - but if I'm being honest, I think breaking the narration to apportion particular voices to the doctor and parents will feel interruptive. It's in the tradition of bedtime stories for the narrator to 'do' a voice as and when and I think that will be preferable.
ReplyDeleteThat's what I meant, I guess I didn't word it correctly my bad!
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