Friday, 14 October 2016

Minor Project - Updated Storyboard Ending & Bed Thumbnails

I adjusted the ending of the storyboard following Phil and Alan's advice, I think it works a bit better now.

I also worked on some more thumbnails for the bed monster, after my tutorial with Alan today it was clear that I need to make the bed more shape oriented so it would fit better with the boy character.

1 comment:

  1. I like what's happening eyes-wise on No 9 - I think that works. In terms of what's happening to the duvet/blankets (the spider's back) maybe you should segment it more obviously, as if it's been shoved up, but go the whole hog, so:

    Also - yes, the ending reads very clearly now. Looking forward to an animatic!